SEPECAT Jaguar GR.3

[Tweek]

Hope you like...

[Jesters-Ink]

She has a shape and and a half don't she!
I'd love to see this drawing with a lot more depth and and at a full pixel count.
Then i recon your on to a winner.

[Supah]

Hi Tweek! Is this a finished work or is this still work in progress?

[santynus]

nice profile Tweek only a little bit flat. it will be a good work if you put some shadows

[Tweek]

Yes, it's finished, but I'm open to suggestions on how to improve it!

I would however say that you wouldn't see much more detail at full size (3000 pixels), as I've not drawn much in the lines of rivets and small details. It's certainly not up to the standard of some profiles on here!

[Supah]

well I have the feeling you could make it really "grow" if you added a few more shadows. For instance under the intake, the lower part of hte actual intake is shaded but it doesnt cast a shadow on the fuselage which it should. Also you seem to draw shadows as a one part affair which is ok for smaller ones but on big ones it really leaves a simplified impression, like on the one casted by the wings. BTW I think this would be a cool profile to show the over wing missile racks these machines had! It's such a unique feature to some british jets like the Jaguar and the Lightning Anyway as it is it is ok too but with a little bit more work it could really standout!

[Tweek]

For instance under the intake, the lower part of hte actual intake is shaded but it doesnt cast a shadow on the fuselage which it should.

Oops... I was meant to put a shadow there! Almost knew I'd forgot something.

I'll try to improve it some time in the next few days.

[Jesters-Ink]

Push it til it breaks Tweek then back it up some.