Sea Glad... opinions please? :)

[sparty72]

something im tinkering with ( again).... your thoughts?



Regards

Sparty

[GrubbyFingers]

Hi Sparty. I reckon you need more shading. It's looking a bit washed out. I'd shade the engine cowling more to give it more shape and add quite dark shading where the nose dives into the cowling. There is quite change in depth there so it should be shown. Likewise with your main wheel. Your tailwheel has nice depth, but your mainwheel is flat. You also have the tyre highlight running around the lower half of the tyre but none on top. I'd give the top of the tyre a highlight too.

See what you think.

Graeme.

[Ugo Crisponi]

IMHO...reduce the reflections and brightness in the propeller and make sharper shadows in the tail....

[sparty72]

Thanks guys for the input
ok..ive played about quickly and got this:


looking better?

[GrubbyFingers]

Much better. You need to look at your prop still. I think the light looks like you have a different light source on the prop compared to the airframe. I think you need to move the highlight on the upper blade about half way across the face of the blade and reduce the highlight on the lower blade.
Grubby.

[BLOWHARD]

Can we see it bigger maybe?

[gamary]

Can we see it bigger maybe?

Yes, please.

[sparty72]

Hows that?

[gamary]

Very nice. I like the Gladiator.

[Otterkins2]

Really great Sparty! I like the open cockpit door. Little things like that add a lot of personality and sparkle to a profile. I'd like to see you finish that Focke Wulf you started on. That will be a real show stopper for sure!!!