MB 151

[esoler13]

Trying to put a profile here for first time
This is an five years old profile of MB 151

[Otterkins2]

Way ahead of anything I can do! Nice job. I would suggest that you tone down the panel lines though as they are way too dark. Let's see the other rockets you've got in your pockets. Great stuff so far!

[BLOWHARD]

PRETTY BOLD COLORS!
What's going on with the cowling and air scoop leading edge? Are you showing perspective there?
I agree about the panel likes. The real trick; linear elements flatten out your profile, you want to see them but you don't want them to overpower the form. Your rivets are nice and subtle though.
Again, very bold, nice work

[JMSmith]

hi blowhard,

don't you know nuthin the engine is offset, looks really weird in photos.

but i think the top edge of cowling is the wrong shape, will check later.

[esoler13]

In this view the "twisted engine" is seen from the other side
In the previous message I was mistaken and I put MB 151. It must be MB 152

[gamary]

Welcome! Nice job. One bit of advice I'd give you is the following: you can use black to shade most colours. But when you're shading yellow/orange, you should use red instead. Otherwise, the yellow looks like some odd-looking dirty colour.

[esoler13]

Thank you Ga?tan.
These profiles are some years old When I began to make profiles. then I aplied black for the sadows over all colours. You are rigth: Black plus yellow seems dirty.

[JMSmith]

hi esoler,

thought so, the top edge is slightly out, move the start of the curve slighty foward, then make the rest of it to the cowl front more curved, your a bit too flat at the moment, it's note a great deal out, but enough to make it look wrong.