Very nice work mjag
Well after sitting it down for a while. I decided to finish her up. Heres one with the polish markings and camo.
Very nice work mjag
looks nice but theres something about that antenna shadow... look at lighting angle and the shadow from wings then compare to the antenna.... otherwise great job![]()
Very goog MJAG.
The wing come out very well, details are crisps.
Just one comment on the highlight in the fuselage, a bit too strong IMHO. perhaps you could lift up a bit?. Should be a bit more "matte looking"...
BTW, very good again
Ugo
p.s. check the shadows: the one in the antenna doesn't match the one in the tail. It seems like the light some from the right side of the plane rather than from up....
Last edited by Ugo Crisponi; 2nd March 2009 at 13:04.
Thanks for the commenst so far. Very helpfull as always
@Agnt Matt I will mess with the antenna shadow tonight. It was on the to do list, But completely forgot about it.
@Ugo I will tone down the highlights a bit
lol quick draw eh Ugo? and Mjag glad to hear it as i said stick with it you always learn from overlooking something the amount of times i've forgotten something always amazes me, some of my first had no tailplane lighting or other essentials![]()
hi Mjag,
nice, just one thing i have a major issue with, and that is the colour demarcation, it really neads to be blurred not much just enough to take the sharpness off.
JMSmith (back by popular demand)
I don't normally comment on jets, but this was one I drew constantly as a kid. Great job! I agree with comments about the wing though. It blends too much with the body. Great job otherwise!