Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5

[Maciej N]

My old stuff - one of the first. It was made only using mouse!

[gamary]

Even better than the F6F!

[Ugo Crisponi]

Indeed. But again something strange with the propeller (?)

[Jesters-Ink]

Mouse, I dont use anything else

Your F6F is miles better imo, having done both WWI and WWII.
Both look shiny, but I think this drawing would be better with a matt finish.

[Maciej N]

Thanks for Your comments. For now I don't need to improve both F6F and SE 5 but for eventually next publication I do it and use Your advices. Thanks a lot.

[BLOWHARD]

Very nice Mac! You can't go too far wrong with this sort of subject.
But your tire should be round, right now it's got flat-ish sides. You could also try a little more definition under the wings. The trailing edges were pretty thin.
Also, a little nit-pic, the PC10 upper color should wrap around the edges of the wing, there should be a border of upper color all around the lower surfaces.
And I agree that the prop is a little strand looking.
So...if you ever get around to reworking it...

Just in case you need reference-
restauration du SE5a
Wingnut Wings
Wingnut Wings

By the way, I only use a mouse too

[Maciej N]

Very nice Mac! You can't go too far wrong with this sort of subject.
But your tire should be round, right now it's got flat-ish sides. You could also try a little more definition under the wings. The trailing edges were pretty thin.
Also, a little nit-pic, the PC10 upper color should wrap around the edges of the wing, there should be a border of upper color all around the lower surfaces.
And I agree that the prop is a little strand looking.
So...if you ever get around to reworking it...

Just in case you need reference-
restauration du SE5a
Wingnut Wings
Wingnut Wings

By the way, I only use a mouse too

Thanks a lot!

[Maciej N]

Completly reworked

[inkworm]

Still nice, though I'd be tempted to say the green is a little dark and agree with Ugo's old comments about the prop still looking a bit weird even though it would have been laminated.

[Baron]

Looks good. The difference to the old profile is noticeable.
I have no idea about the propeller. Just one thing: Didi the SE5 really have such square wheels? If not you should change the lights there.

Cheers,