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    La-7

    Thierry inspired me with red stars
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    Re: La-7

    Soviet VVS stuff at last!
    Very nicely done.
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    Re: La-7

    Nice!!!
    Muy buen trabajo!!!
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    Re: La-7

    Very nice, but the tail seems to be too large because of your light effect ?

    Wlad
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    Re: La-7

    You're probably right. Better?
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    Re: La-7

    Yes ! much better ! (I've made the same mistake with my Yak..)
    Well done

    Wlad
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    Re: La-7

    Hi Arthur!

    Nice drawing, but miss some shadows.

    from the propeller blade on the spinner and fuselage
    from the wing on the undercarriage doors
    from the undercarriage cover on the wheel

    I still think that the vertical tail looks too fat! Just make a small thin light effect. Hard for me to tell you in english. Maybe check my Ju88 threat to see what I mean. http://www.simmerspaintshop.com/foru...-ju-88-d-3174/

    Generally I think your wing undersides are too light, but each of us here has another taste. I like it much more darker.

    Cheers, Simon
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    Re: La-7

    Thanks Simon. I tried to fix it.
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    Re: La-7

    Top level !! Great
    Pilote was "red" Hartmann ??

    Wlad
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    Re: La-7

    I'm thinking that this profile needs a more discernible dark shadow along the bottom of the fuselage.

    It'll help give a sense that it curves around underneath, right now I don't get that sense, more that its kinda flat.

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