Tin hat time . . .

[Jesters-Ink]

More Volume

[BLOWHARD]

OH OH OH OH!!! Is that ever better!!!
Really nice awe inspiring work!
(I might still ditch some of the sharpness on the fabric rudder but that's more of a taste issue )

It was worth the wait, right Otter?

[gamary]

Niiiiice!

Do more! With weathering!

[Jesters-Ink]

Thanks both.

Niiiiice!

Do more! With weathering!

I will, I'm still messin with the detail atm, soo much still to do
not even started on the wing yet.

[Otterkins2]

Sheer genius can never be rushed. It must be savoured and enjoyed like a good glass of wine and a willful woman. Jester's work is ALWAYS worth the wait! As an aside BH, the rudder detail is pretty much spot on from the photos I have.

[Baron]

Hi Jester!

Looks amazing! The only thing that looks a little bit strange to me is the main wing lighting/shadows. Now it looks the wing is double thick as it should be. If you enlarge the shadow at the wing from the end a little bit more in the middle I think it looks better! difficult to discribe in english-sorry.

[Jesters-Ink]

Hi Jester!

Looks amazing! The only thing that looks a little bit strange to me is the main wing lighting/shadows. Now it looks the wing is double thick as it should be. If you enlarge the shadow at the wing from the end a little bit more in the middle I think it looks better! difficult to discribe in english-sorry.

You could do a quick drawing to show me?

[Baron]

Hi Jester!

In this area I think the lighting doesn't fit to the geometry of the wing.



Also the panel lines seem to be very round and give the wing this shape.



With adding some more shadow in the middle of the wing you make the wing a little bit more flat and not as round as it looks to me on yours.



Just my feeling, but maybe somebody sees it the same way as I do.

Cheers,

[Jesters-Ink]

Ah now I understand what you are saying.

Here is a pic I based my wing shape on, do you think I have over done it?

[BLOWHARD]

I'm pretty sure what he's saying is shift the dark further toward the middle of the wing, putting the bulk of it at the fullest part of the wing. Or at least that's what I'd do