B5N Kate

[wildr]

Here you go John. My first profile done several years ago on another site. No time to do much more than a few versions of them.

[BLOWHARD]

Nice

[javo]

Nice!!!
Muy buena ilustración!!!

[JMSmith]

nice one paul,

now lets get the crayons out and do some more

[wildr]

Well John, not what I expected, I thaught someone would have something to say about color, shape, highlight, etc... after studying the work here I made some changes on rivets, aging along with another Kate. The first Lt. Mikami from the carrier Kaga at Pearl Harbor, second is Lt. Tominaga's Kate from the carrier Hiryu at the Battle of Midway (inflight attitude and on deck).

[santynus]

very nice work!

[JMSmith]

thats what this place is all about paul,

no matter what level of skill you have someone will allways help you out and gently heave you up to the next level, with one exception, ME
if your name is GM then i just do it to make him cry

[GiantFlyingRobots]

thats what this place is all about paul,

no matter what level of skill you have someone will allways help you out and gently heave you up to the next level, with one exception, ME
if your name is GM then i just do it to make him cry

I actually think Pauls comment was about the lack of feedback that he has received about his work.

[Jarink]

I like the highlight line along the fuselage, but the bottom could use some stronger shadowing. It looks a little flat down there, especially on the rear fuselage.

Otherwise, very nice work!

[gamary]

if your name is GM then i just do it to make him cry

I find the fuselage highlight should be blurred more, especially on the first of the three profiles (Lt. Mikami). However, not everybody seems to think so, so it's obviously a matter of taste.

You could add a little shading to make the lower fuselage rounder.

Aside from that, I like the style. It's very different from what I do, but I like it.