Hi, There!
Looks nice for a start, but I?d say make the mottling ("blotches" on the sides) bigger and somewhat more diffuse, so you might get some kind of "organic" flow from dark top camo to the light light lower paint.
Look up some photos of Luftwaffe fighters (especially from ?42-?45) and you?ll see what I mean.
Nice Beta anyways!!!![]()