Thanks, guys! It's supposed to be published in AirStrike Magazine, a new French magazine availbale online and due out in October.
@John: I have another one going the right way, just for you. Go ahead with the problems. I'm all ears. (I just hope you're not going to have me redraw the whole thingPlease don't hurt me.). If it's the missing pitot probe near the radome, I know about it and will be correcting it soon.