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[Heinz]

Hi there. I really like the profile what you have made and here are few thoughts from me about the layout you're working with.

The borders seems to be ok for my eye and those might not be so important if the person is going to get frames on it etc. Aircraft in itself might be too big for this size of a canvas and i would cut down size a bit and also take it down closer to the bottom so it would have more room around.Bw images is a nice idea, but it might be difficult to get them right there esp. when the picture on the right gets kind of too close to the aircrafts tail.What comes to the grey box i would probably remove it for good. It takes too much space from the main picture and also takes attention from the most imprtant part > aircraft.

The royal marks could have same size if possible and not too close to the corners.

Well it was all from me i think.

It has been pleasure for me to watch these great pieces of art what you all have been doing in here so keep up with the good work.

[JMSmith]

thanks guys,

for all your input, but this is how the customer wants it, and he who pays the piper calls the tune

just redrawing the crests then i'm done

[Clint Mitchell]

Hi John

That text down the bottom needs centering (title & line below it) and a bit of balancing jiggery pokery (it's visually a bit unbalanced with the specs). The typography can make or break a design mate and makes all the difference.

Clint

[GrubbyFingers]

That's the bottom line, John, and that's who pays the bill!

I used to have one client whose attitude I describe as: "You have complete ceative freedom to do whatever I tell you!"

Really nice work, John. I look forward to the next one.


Grubby.

[Baron]

HI John!

Very nice posters! And of course great profile work. Just one question: There is a highlight from the canopy diagonal downward the fuselage. What's that?

Cheers,

[JMSmith]

hi baron,

its is the shape of the fuselage, you can see the highlight on most images, i nearly left it off, forgot all about it till i was checking everything

[gamary]

Nice job, John.

but if you think i will go easy on your work, your barking up the wrong tree

We all know that's a lost cause. We'll have to cope with you...

[JMSmith]

looking for someone to print and sell them, original customer no longer getting it

[gamary]

looking for someone to print and sell them, original customer no longer getting it

I might be able to help. Email me.

[Supah]

What an akwardly small rudder for such a large plane! That couldn't have been good when the wind started picking up.