Harrier FRS1

[Supah]

I'd make the shadows darker and the highlights brighter, especially the small NACA intake on the intake looks to light shadow wise.

[ChristopherC]

Still need to bring up the highlights and the tail fin looks to flat, from the top it isn't flat but tapers back, plus the entire lower fin should be in shadow. Getting there but time for the nit picking to start!

Thanks inkworm, I'm working on the highlights.

I'm not sure I understand regarding the tail fin, do you mean the outline is too flat, or it looks 2D? And why does the lower fin need to be in shadow?

Chris

[Ugo Crisponi]

Coming up pretty well

[ChristopherC]

OK, I've brought up the hilights a bit and darkened the shadows, looks a bit more 3D now.

I think I see what you meant by the tail fin inkwork, I've added some more shading and highlights to it.

[Ugo Crisponi]

need to highlight more the intake, to make it being more visible and add light over the wings and stabilizer

[ChristopherC]

Thanks for the feedback Ugo! I've increased the highlights on the intake and horizontal sufraces. More work on the pylons too, covering up most of the work I did on the nozzles!

[Supah]

Looking very sharp Chris What kind of armament are you planning for this one?

[inkworm]

Sidewinders, what else?

[Vacajun]

Nice job Chris!

[gamary]

It's starting to look very good, Chris. The only thing I'd suggest you rework is the highlight on the intake and forward fuselage. I think you should place it lower on the fuselage. Right now it looks as if the fuselage sides and air intake are flat-sided.

The rest of the shape definition is very good and I think it would be worth the trouble to correct this. It's your call of course, but your drawing looks very promising so I think you should do it.